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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
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The maps display the comparison of the university sports
courts
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 in 1990 and now.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there are several changes to the sports centre, taking to details from the left
side
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 at the
park
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 and car
park
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 in 1990 turn to basketball and tennis
courts
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,
while
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 the outdoor pool on the opposite sides remains unchanged. Compared 1990 to now, in the left area there are major changes happening, from the north
side
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, the place that used to be a
park
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 in the past is gone,
whereas
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 that area was constructed as a basketball court recently.
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, looking at the south
side
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, the car
park
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 was
also
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 removed and became four
courts
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 to play tennis. On the right
side
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 of the maps, the indoor pool surrounding
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the reception and café state slightly different during the periods,
hence
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 the changing room which used to be located right in the south of reception moved to across area that faces the outdoor pool.
Moreover
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, the new building that functions as a fitness
center
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 changed the place for tennis
courts
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 in the past.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words courts, side, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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