Some think that these environmental problems are too big for individuals to be solved, while others think that governments cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals take some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
people
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hold the opinion that
individuals
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on their own cannot do much to protect the
environment
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,
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it is believed by others say that even governments can make a difference only with the active support of
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essay shall discuss both views. I believe that
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there are some environmental areas in which
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intervention is paramount, I
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believe that in some areas
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must lead the way. There are many reasons why some
people
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say that
people
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cannot do anything for the
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. The first reason is the lack of professional knowledge needed to cope with serious environmental issues like soil erosion and salinity, which require a significant amount of investigation and research.
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, when an environmental emergency or accident happens
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as an oil spill near the border line, only
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action or international coordination is required.
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, those who say that even governments cannot do anything unless
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cooperate, give their reasons as follows.
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, if
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government
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the government
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enacts laws for the betterment of the
environment
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, and
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do not cooperate,
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there
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be no results.
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, in India, there is a strict ban on the use of
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plastics, but
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are still using them. So, the involvement of
people
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is imperative for any
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action to be useful. I believe that individual actions, small as they may be, can prove very effective.
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,
people
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can avoid driving the car, and take public transport, walk, or bicycle
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.
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will reduce the use of fossil fuels and cut pollution. So, individual action can never be overstated.
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, there are steps which can only be taken by the
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,
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the protection
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of wildlife and forests, implementing strict punishment for violators of environmental laws and signing international treaties regarding
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environment
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the environment
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. In these
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aspects,
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the governments must show the way and
individuals
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should support the
government
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. In conclusion, when it comes to environmental problems, individual actions are indispensable in the problem-solving process. But the most pressing and complicated problems go far beyond an individual's capability and so require the effort of the
government
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