The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two site maps demonstrate the Norbiton town's current industry
area
and Use synonyms
it's
future development.
The industrial Correct your spelling
its
area
is located at the east of the town, between the Use synonyms
river
and a Use synonyms
highway
. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
area
, there is a roundabout with two exits, Use synonyms
having
one connecting to the Unnecessary verb
apply
highway
and the other leading to the central Use synonyms
area
of the industrial park. In total 7 factories are built along the street, where 3 of them are located next to the roundabout. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
river
is located in the north of the industrial Use synonyms
area
, and it is Use synonyms
parraelle
to the Correct your spelling
parallel
highway
. There is Use synonyms
a
farmland across Remove the article
apply
to
the Change preposition
apply
river
.
As per the future Use synonyms
developement
plan, Correct your spelling
development
this
Linking Words
area
will be redesigned Use synonyms
to
a living community with a lot of housing Change preposition
into
area
, Use synonyms
accompanying
Wrong verb form
accompanied
with
Change preposition
by
neccessary
facilities Correct your spelling
necessary
such
as Linking Words
school
, playground, medical centre and shops. Particularly, Correct article usage
a school
school
will be located Add an article
the school
at the end
of the street. Linking Words
Moreover
, more Linking Words
infrustructure
will be built, Correct your spelling
infrastructure
such
as a bridge for people to cross the Linking Words
river
and a roundabout on the Use synonyms
highway
for entering Use synonyms
to
the Change preposition
apply
area
.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
area
is being planned as a living Use synonyms
area
rather than an industrial place.Use synonyms
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