These maps
are
demonstrate different layouts of a school in 1958 and in recent days.
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apply
Overall
, there are several changes happened to the school , but in a significant way , the car park is Linking Words
fanished
, Correct your spelling
finished
while
now there are a lot of new buildings like a pool and fitness Linking Words
centre
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are
built, and the library existed in the past but now it is changed to be a computer room and resource Wrong verb form
being
centre
.
In 1985 , Use synonyms
while
the population was only 1,500 there biggest part of the school was a field and just two blocks Linking Words
in
the right the classrooms , Change preposition
to
while
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in
the left a library , office and a small car park Change preposition
on
in addition
to the main parking after crossing the road.
Nowadays , the Linking Words
classroom
blocks number are increased to 3 and only the main parking Correct quantifier usage
number of classroom
are
remains, with Correct your spelling
area
building
of both a pool and fitness Add an article
the building
centre
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in
the left side of the field , with a big replacement of the library to become a resource Change preposition
on
centre
and computer room.Use synonyms