The pie chart below represents the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The bar chart shows how these causes affected three regions of the world in the 1990s. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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degradation
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degraded
Europe
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Oceania
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degradation
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degradation
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Oceania
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Oceania
degradation
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