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The pie chart below represents the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The bar chart shows how these causes affected three regions of the world in the 1990s. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart below represents the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The bar chart shows how these causes affected three regions of the world in the 1990s. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie graph illustrates the major causes of
the
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land
degradation
 from all around the world, and the table depicts how much
land
degradaded
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degraded
 in North America,
Europe
 and
Ocenia
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Oceania
due to
 the main factors.
Overall
, over-grazing is the most significant reason
of
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 worldwide
land
degradation
. The proportions of total
land
 lost
due to
degradation
 in
Europe
 and Oceania are noticeable,
however
, their
losts
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loss
 primarily depends on different factors. There are three main
land
degradation
 reasons, and the primary factor is over-grazing.
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 of grasses by animals accounts for just above a third of the total
land
degradation
. Depletion of forests is the second-highest with 30%, and
this
 is followed by
over agricultural
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 activities which are nearly 30% of the total lost. The remaining volume of
the
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land
degradation
is depending
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 on other causes with %7. Almost a quarter of the total
land
degradation
is
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occured
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occurs
 in
Europe
, which is followed by
Ocenia
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Oceania
 and North America, with 13% and 5% respectively.
While
 the obvious cause in
Ocenia
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Oceania
 is over-grazing with 11.3% of the total
degradation
, deforestation (9.8%) and over-cultivation (7.7%) are the major causes in
Europe
.
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