In some areas of the UD, a 'curfew' is imposed, In which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
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essay, it will be elucidate
some positions and a personal opinion will be provided.
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Firstly
, a curfew
is the act of restrict
youngsters Change the verb form
restricting
to stay
out of doors after a specific time, usually at night. Change preposition
from staying
For instance
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curfew
due to
increment
of assassinations perpetrated by 14-15 year olds involved in gangs and drug dealing. Correct article usage
an increment
Thus
, conservatives consider these regulations as a measure which promote
an environment of safety Correct subject-verb agreement
promotes
both
childhood and adulthood. Change preposition
in both
Also
, it prevent
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prevents
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from getting
rounded
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involved
spend
leisure time with parents, relatives or close friends. Wrong verb form
spending
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However
, a curfew
can be mocked when a teen is accompanied by a grown-up.
On the other hand
, progressives claim curfews are just an analogy of
being in prison. The impact of these instances could affect negatively the freedom and personal growth of youth. It would become another issue since emotions Change preposition
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such
as depression, anxiety and stress are as harmful as criminal life. For instance
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rupture
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the rupture
Hence
, these prohibitions undermine the instinct act to socialize responsibly with others and interrupt the ability to make assertive decisions.
To conclude
, both positions have pros and cons but, in my opinion, I completely disagree with curfews. In spite of being an affordable solution, is useless and does not address the root of the problem. I think lovely parental education and trust from society towards young members could diminish evil acting.Submitted by [email protected] on
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