In some areas of the UD, a 'curfew' is imposed, In which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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crimes are committed by them impairing a brilliant generation. To face it, in some areas of the UD, curfews are implemented.
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sectors of
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some positions and a personal opinion will be provided.
Firstly
, a
curfew
is the act of
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youngsters
to stay
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out of doors after a specific time, usually at night.
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established a
curfew
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of assassinations perpetrated by 14-15 year olds involved in gangs and drug dealing.
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, conservatives consider these regulations as a measure which
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an environment of safety
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childhood and adulthood.
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, it
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infants
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in criminal activities and
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leisure time with parents, relatives or close friends.
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enhance their passionate skills.
However
, a
curfew
can be mocked when a teen is accompanied by a grown-up.
On the other hand
, progressives claim curfews are just an analogy
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being in prison. The impact of these instances could affect negatively the freedom and personal growth of youth. It would become another issue since emotions
such
as depression, anxiety and stress are as harmful as criminal life.
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a pandemic
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of COVID-19 was a global
curfew
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strongly affected
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suicide cases and, indeed,
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of restrictions.
Hence
, these prohibitions undermine the instinct act to socialize responsibly with others and interrupt the ability to make assertive decisions.
To conclude
, both positions have pros and cons but, in my opinion, I completely disagree with curfews. In spite of being an affordable solution, is useless and does not address the root of the problem. I think lovely parental education and trust from society towards young members could diminish evil acting.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • curfew
  • teenagers
  • out of doors
  • accompanied
  • crime prevention
  • personal freedom
  • independence
  • parental authority
  • monitoring
  • autonomy
  • effectiveness
  • enforcement
  • confrontations
  • law enforcement
  • alternative measures
  • civic engagement
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