Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think is a positive or negative develompent?

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hours

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just to use their smartphones.

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can lead to bad impacts in which they can not grow well. Based on my opinion, There are 2 reasons regarding

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matter.

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the lack of parental monitoring, and

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the

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of

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have been improved nowadays. Parental supervision

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a significant role in

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case. They should be monitoring the gadget usage of their

children

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so they don't get addicted,

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when the addiction comes, the

children

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might get a big problem in

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terms of their

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,

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as they can't socialize effectively with their

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. The parents can do several things to provide

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.

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, they can

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the screen time of their

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for only a small number of hours

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, it might be very useful for

children

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to get rid of the addiction.

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, parents can take

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their

children

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to do some outdoor activities, it can be any kind of sports or just

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around the park. Other than that, the

technologies

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have their own role as well in

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matter. The improvement of

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can lead to both sides, negative and positive. Yet in

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problem

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there are more negative impacts

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the

children

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development

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. If we look back

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to

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several years later,

children

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are more active and they tend to play outside with their

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mate

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and

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a lot

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of interactions

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interactions

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the

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not

published

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massively and improved significantly. To summarize, the excessive use of smartphones

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bad impact

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children

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that

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they can't

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socialize well with their friends. It can caused by the lack of their

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role and the huge progress of the

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