The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart displays the number of British people who emigrated to Australia, Spain, New Zealand, France, and the USA over the period 2004 to 2007.
Overall
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, Australia is the optimal country to emigrate among of five categories. Meanwhile, the USA were not the go-to choice for the masses. There were over 40000 people transformed to Australia in 2004 and decreased to about 39000 next year.
This
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figure was followed by a dramatic rise, reaching 52000 in 2006, but it got down to 45000.
Next,
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Similar patterns can be seen in Spain and New Zealand, both of them witnessed a descent.
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, the total amounts of the former country were higher than the latter, which represented from 35000 to 28000 and from 24000 to 21000 respectively. When it comes to the USA, there were 25000 new citizens in 2004, before it was reduced to 18000.
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, in 2006, it resurged to 25000 again and continued to decrease by 5000 people. In France, it represented 33000 first and stood at 35000 after which went down to the lowest(19000).
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