You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram illustrates data about amounts of fish portions in 4 categories in Perth in the years between 2004 and 2014.
Overall
, it is clear, that 2009 was the year when the total numbers were the highest in the row.
To begin
with, 2005 witnessed a significant decrease, since the imports were low in totals, in comparison with the year 2008 when the quantity of imports was the second highest.
Furthermore
, 2007 and 2011 fluctuated around 6000 metric tons, similar to 2013 and 2014.
Moreover
, in 2004 the proportion of fish was only 3142.2, where the imports declined to their lowest point.
However
, the numbers rose in the next years until 2009, when the metric tons reached the highest ratio in total with 8949.
After
this
stage, the amounts had a slight decrease, as we can see a declining trend until 2014
,
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when the numbers dropped down to 5814.7.
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