the diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years
This
image illustrates a ground floor plan of what seems to potray
a library dating back Correct your spelling
portray
in
2001 in comparison to a similar ground floor plan 8 years ahead.
Major changes are made throughout the floor plan Change preposition
to
on
the year 2009. Change preposition
in
Tables
structure Correct your spelling
The table
were
of arranged boxes that Correct subject-verb agreement
was
was
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were
then
changed to long rectangle boxes. The self help
and history shelf were expanded into a variety of Add a hyphen
self-help
selection
that Fix the agreement mistake
selections
attracts
more Wrong verb form
attracted
childrens'
interests, and the fiction side was changed to children's books. Change noun form
children's
Furthermore
, the newspapers and periodicals section were transformed into films and DVDs adjusting to technological change. This
change also
can be seen by
the 2 computers added to the library.
Inversely, changes to the entrance and librarian's desk were not to be made, and the stairs Change preposition
in
lightly
extended.Add a missing verb
were lightly
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