Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas ( in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do? To extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days many

artists

show their products without any restriction from the government or our society. Under

this

circumstance

, some people think that the government do not need to take action to handle

this

problem.

However

, I firmly disagree with

this

idea because

this

issue has a negative influence on our society and

also

it makes decrease worthy of

arts

. First of all, if

artists

do not have restrictions, it could have negative effects on our community. To express their own creativity, sometimes they show

arts

which are away from the standard norm. Under

this

circumstance

, children are influenced by the

artists

or

arts

and their parents should complain to the creators. After that, many people think that the

artists

have a bad effect on our society and they start to block

artists

. For these reasons, the artist who has their own rules will be affected by

this

circumstance

.

For example

, in Korea, children are influenced by singers and actors , especially

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teenagers. Students who desire to be

hip hop

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artists

mimic

artists

’ behaviour and lyrics which are a kind of slang.

For

this

reason, many parents block their kids from watching

hip hop

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artists

. Another reason is that it can cause a decrease in the worth of

art

. If they show their idea freely, it would drop their value of expertise. It means that expressing their creativity without any rules can lower the entry barrier in

this

field.

For

this

reason, people will have a lower admiration of

art

and

also

arts

begin to shrink.

For example

, in Korea, many young generation desire to be

artists

and they want to be

artists

or creators. Under

this

circumstance

, they create a lot of

art

pieces and display them on their Instagram. It means that many young generations no longer think that

art

is not a serious and expertise field.

As a result

,

this

atmosphere reduced the scarcity of Korean

art

. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with

this

opinion because it can have a bad effect on our community, and

also

when they express their creativity without any barriers, it can drop worthy of creativities.