The graph represents the levels of production for primary fuels in a European nation from the year 1981 to 2000.
The presented graph illustrates the manufacturing ranks of principal gasoline in a European nation between 1981 and 2000, during a 19-year period.
It is evident that
Petroleum
always headed the list of production levels. While
Petroleum
and coal pursued an erratic pattern, Natural gas went without change for most of the period.
To begin
with, in 1981, Petroleum
accounted for approximately 100 tonnes
outdoing the creation of coal and natural gas. From 1981 to 1987, the data for Petroleum
increased slightly by 40 tonnes
and remained stable for 5 years. The figure for Petroleum
shrunk to 90 tonnes
in 1991. During a period of 9 years from 1991 to 2000, there was a modest jump in Petroleum
from 90 tonnes
to 120 tonnes
.
On the other hand
, the statistics of
natural gas remained unchanged at 40 Change preposition
on
tonnes
from 1981 to 1994. Between 1994 and 2000, the number of coal ballooned to 83 tonnes
in 2000. At the same time, coal production leveled
off at 80 Change the spelling
levelled
tonnes
. Finally
, this
trend jumped back and forth erratically from 1987 to 2000.Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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