The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
This
picture diagram illustrates how
electricity
is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
This
type of generating centre is usually located near the river so that can be used its
water
.
Firstly
, during the day, the river’s
water
falls down to the High-level reservoir and the strong dam prevents the entire
water
from flowing down and it is allowed to flow through a narrow channel.
Secondly
, The flowing
water
hits the reversible turbines. The
electricity
is produced by turbines movement and
then
it is transferred to power lines and national grids for distribution among consumers
such
as homes , industrial and agricultural places. After that, The
water
leads to a low-level reservoir. During the night, all the mentioned steps are reversed.
Water
is pumped into the turbine from the low-level reservoir and
generating
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electricity
again.
This
cycle continuously is carried out every 24 hours.
This
process plays an important role in
countries
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countries'
country's
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progress and independence because the foundation of every nation's industry depends on
electricity
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • turbine
  • generate electricity
  • transmit
  • low-level reservoir
  • high-level reservoir
  • dam
  • cycle of electricity production
  • energy storage
  • flowing water
  • sustainability
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