the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the development plan of
central
Add an article
the central
a central
library
from 20 years ago and today
. Overall
, the center
of Change the spelling
centre
library
Add an article
the library
today
has many changed
compared to how the Replace the word
changes
center
of Change the spelling
centre
library
looks in 20 years ago. Add an article
the library
Furthermore
, the center
of Change the spelling
centre
library
Add an article
the library
today
is more well-structured than in the past.
In
the left side of the maps, Change preposition
On
in
20 years ago, there were CDs, videos, and computer games Change preposition
apply
room
, reading
Correct article usage
a reading
room
, and space for collection
of adult fiction Add an article
a collection
the collection
books
is
situated between those rooms. Now, Unnecessary verb
apply
CDs
, videos and computer games Correct article usage
the CDs
room
has changed into children's
fiction Correct article usage
a children's
books
room
. The room
is also
decorated with two sofas and can be use
Change the verb form
be used
to
storytelling events. Since Change preposition
for
newspaper
and magazines now is rare to exist, a reading Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
room
has changed into the
computer Correct article usage
a
room
now and for space between those rooms have
changed into space for all reference Correct subject-verb agreement
has
books
.
In
the right side of the maps, a children's Change preposition
On
boook
Correct your spelling
book
room
now has changed into lecture
Correct article usage
a lecture
room
, and enquiry
desk that usually people use for tickets and book returns has changed into Correct article usage
the enquiry
cafe
. Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
However
, between cafe
and Correct article usage
the cafe
lecture
Correct article usage
the lecture
room
, there are self-service machines, information
desk, and Correct article usage
an information
collection
of adult fiction Correct article usage
a collection
books
. More than that, today
, there is
no tables and chairs anymore in the middle of the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
library
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, today, room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 6 times.
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