The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The Diagram showcases the production of
tea
by selecting freshly picked tea
leaves resulting into
aromatic Change preposition
in
tea
. overall
, the process
represents the
five different steps Correct article usage
apply
such
as picking fresh tea
leaves and buds, withering , rolling , cutting , fermenting and fire drying.
The process
commences by plucking tea
leaves and buds arieally
arranged. only Correct your spelling
really
best
quality top two leaves are selected which Correct article usage
the best
a
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apply
further
undergoes process
of whithering which represents drying out moisture from selected leaves using a fan. selected leaves are arranged in the rack and Correct article usage
the process
fan
passes air on the leaves Correct article usage
the fan
with
retains only 60% of moisture.
Eventually, depending upon the required finished product Correct your spelling
which
such
as loose tea
or tea
bag, leaves passes
through traditional rolling or Correct subject-verb agreement
pass
mordern
cutting Correct your spelling
modern
method
. In Fix the agreement mistake
methods
rolling
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the rolling
a rolling
method
, leaves are rolled flat to be broken through which enzymes are released. this
accounts for process
of oxidation, Add an article
the process
whereas
cutting
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the cutting
method
involves fermentation by curling and torning
of leaves. Correct your spelling
turning
Although
rolling is traditional
Add an article
the traditional
a traditional
method
, cutting is quicker as well as
gives smaller granules.
In addition
to that, rolled leaves are spreaded
on cement or tiles which Correct your spelling
spread
due to
frequent contact with air; changes to copper colour. Finally
, they are dried with the help of a hot air oven representing almost 97% moisture reduction resulting into
flavoured and aromatic Change preposition
in
tea
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