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The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The Diagram showcases the production of
tea
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 by selecting freshly picked
tea
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 leaves resulting
into
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in
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 aromatic
tea
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.
overall
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, the
process
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 represents
the
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apply
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five different steps
such
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 as picking fresh
tea
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 leaves and buds, withering , rolling , cutting , fermenting and fire drying. The
process
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 commences by plucking
tea
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 leaves and buds
arieally
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really
 arranged. only
best
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the best
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 quality top two leaves are selected which
a
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apply
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further
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 undergoes
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process
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the process
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 of whithering which represents drying out moisture from selected leaves using a fan. selected leaves are arranged in the rack and
fan
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the fan
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 passes air on the leaves
with
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which
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 retains only 60% of moisture. Eventually, depending upon the required finished product
such
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 as loose
tea
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 or
tea
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 bag, leaves
passes
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pass
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 through traditional rolling or
mordern
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modern
 cutting
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method
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methods
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. In
rolling
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the rolling
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method
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, leaves are rolled flat to be broken through which enzymes are released.
this
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 accounts for
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process
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the process
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 of oxidation,
whereas
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cutting
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the cutting
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method
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 involves fermentation by curling and
torning
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turning
 of leaves.
Although
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 rolling is
traditional
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the traditional
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method
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, cutting is quicker
as well as
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 gives smaller granules.
In addition
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 to that, rolled leaves are
spreaded
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spread
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 on cement or tiles which
due to
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 frequent contact with air; changes to copper colour.
Finally
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, they are dried with the help of a hot air oven representing almost 97% moisture reduction resulting
into
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in
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 flavoured and aromatic
tea
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, process, method with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • plucking
  • withering
  • rolling
  • fermentation
  • drying
  • grading
  • packaging
  • oxidation
  • quality
  • efficiency
  • cost-effectiveness
  • scalability
  • aroma
  • flavor profile
  • sequence of steps
  • equipment
  • methodology
  • production rate
  • comparative analysis
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