the graph below shows the number of university graduatesin canada from 1992 to 2007
The line chart illustrates the
amount
of graduates from Canadian universities in Change the quantifier
number
years
between 1992 to 2007.
Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, it can be seen there is a similar gradual upward trend for both females and males. However
, there is a consistent
large gap between the amount of women and men over the course of the Change the word
consistently
years
.
To begin
with, there is an incline for the first two years
, which achieved an estimate of 105,000 women and 75,000 men. For the next two years
, there is a slight decrease, reaching back to its starting points, which are around 100,000 and 70,000 for females and males respectively. After that, it continues growing for both trends, excluding the small rise and fall for the boys in the range of 2000 and 2002.
Lastly
, both reached a peak in 2007, in which there are about 150,000 for girls, while
there are about 100,000 for boys.Submitted by nadiamanda.salsabilla on
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