The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The graph gives information about
electricity
production
and
consumption
of the top ten
countries
in billion
kWh
in 2014.
Overall
we can see that most of the
countries
produce more
electricity
rather than their
consumption
. The top two
countries
, China and the United States produce and consume more
electricity
compared to other
countries
. China produces 5,398
kWh
and consumes 5,322
Kwh
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kWh
of
electricity
. The United States, in the second place, produces 4,099
Kwh
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KWh
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and consumes slightly less than its
production
at 3,866
kWh
electricity
.
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the top ten
countries
, only Germany consumes more than their
produces
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. It generates 526.6
kWh
of
electricity
and consumes 582.5
kWh
. Compared to the top two
countries
, the remaining eight
countries
in the top 10 positions have significant differences in their
production
and
consumption
of
electricity
. In the third place, Russia's
electricity
production
is only one-fourth of the United States at 1,057
kWh
. In the tenth position, Republic of Korea produce 485.1
kWh
and consumes 449.5
kWh
of
electricity
.
Iit
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It
is almost one-half of
the
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Russia’s
production
and
consumption
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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