The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The graph gives information about
electricity
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production
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and
consumption
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of the top ten
countries
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in billion
kWh
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in 2014.
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we can see that most of the
countries
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produce more
electricity
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rather than their
consumption
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. The top two
countries
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, China and the United States produce and consume more
electricity
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compared to other
countries
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. China produces 5,398
kWh
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and consumes 5,322
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Kwh
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kWh
of
electricity
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. The United States, in the second place, produces 4,099
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Kwh
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KWh
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and consumes slightly less than its
production
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at 3,866
kWh
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electricity
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.
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the top ten
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, only Germany consumes more than their
produces
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. It generates 526.6
kWh
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of
electricity
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and consumes 582.5
kWh
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. Compared to the top two
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, the remaining eight
countries
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in the top 10 positions have significant differences in their
production
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and
consumption
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of
electricity
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. In the third place, Russia's
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production
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is only one-fourth of the United States at 1,057
kWh
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. In the tenth position, Republic of Korea produce 485.1
kWh
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and consumes 449.5
kWh
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of
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It
is almost one-half of
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Russia’s
production
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and
consumption
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, consumption, countries, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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