two maps below show an island before ans after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Two maps illustrate before and after the
facilites
development of an island. Correct your spelling
facilities
Overall
, it is obvious that before the construction
began, there is
no facilities to use at all, after the Wrong verb form
were
construction
, there are
more Wrong verb form
were
restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
accomodation
.
It can be seen that some trees are staying in the same place without being Correct your spelling
accommodation
cut-down
, except a tree that Correct your spelling
cut down
surrounded
by other trees. After the establishment, new facilities Add a missing verb
is surrounded
such
as a restaurant and reception have been built. There are many Change preposition
of accomodation
accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
accommodations
that
located Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
both sides Change preposition
on
besides
the restaurant and reception. In addition
, there is footpath
near the houses Correct article usage
a footpath
while
there is a vehicle track to ride to the facilities
However
, one of the most noticable
changes is the pier between two boats which is located outside. Behind Correct your spelling
noticeable
notable
this
island, there is a beach where before the construction
people were not allowed to go swimming but after the construction
, people can go swimming.Submitted by ieltswriting91 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words construction with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼