The charts below give information about children under 18learjing musical instruments in one region of the UK in 1996 and 2016.

The charts below give information about children under 18learjing musical instruments in one region of the UK in 1996 and 2016.
The given charts demonstrate the number of underage learning musical
instruments
in the UK between 1996 to 2016.
Overall
, children who learned musical
instruments
tended to increase during these 10 years. The figures for keyboard and piano were significantly higher than in other countries,
while
statistics were lowest for other playing
instruments
. From 1996 to 2016, there was a considerable increase in the number of children who acquired skills in playing utensils from 44% not learning to 76%. The most
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instrument in 1996 was the piano, reaching 30 children, going down to about 28 pupils in 2016. The keyboard was the second most popular tool in 1996, hitting a high 30 people in the next 10 years. Turning to other
instruments
, the most admired utensil was an electric guitar in 2016 than the violin in 1996. The acoustic guitar saw a noticeable downward trend from 8 people in 1996 to 3 people in 2016. The figures for those who had more than 1 instrument were more popular throughout the period in question than those who chose other
instruments
.
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