The diagram illustrates the process of producing bricks from clay for the building industry.
The diagram shows how to produce
bricks
from a material such
as clay for the building industry. Overall
, there are 6 steps that start from digging and end to deliver it to the next aspects.
It can be seen that to make bricks
, the first stage is to dig the clay with a digger. After that, divide the metal grid using a roller, so the dregs can be removed. There are two ways to create the shape of the bricks
which involve sand and water, it is either using a wire cutter to cut the bricks
or using a mould to make them.
The other stage are
drying oven, and the duration is approximately 24 to 48 hours. Change the verb form
is
Then
, there will be a kiln to heat the bricks
, it begins with a moderate temperature which is around 200 degrees Celcius
- 980 degrees Celcius
, moving to a higher degree which is about 870 Celcius
- 1300 Celcius
, and this
step is ended
with a cooling chamber within 72 hours. Wrong verb form
ends
Finally
, it will be packed before moving on to the delivery step.Submitted by ieltswriting91 on
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