Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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rendering a

punishment

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of time could

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number of

criminal

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. And the others thinking about several

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more preferable to that problems.

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with those opinions, because

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advantages dan disadvantages that

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the statements. In reducing

risk

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of

criminal

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severely

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punishment

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good

ways

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perpetrators

and never

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their mistakes again.

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behavior

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society

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society

regulations is making

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society

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think that the government do not

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society

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regulations

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.

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of crime even though their

punishment

is prison.

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others peoples

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other people

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give an opinion that many

ways

which could enforceing a

society

in applicable legal rules with a prioritizing

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regulations

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of

society

such

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education and realizing

perpetrators

when they are currently in detention to making them going to better human along increasing a security of

society

as well as

the government,

instead

reducing a risky of

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that could arise any time.

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number of

criminal

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criminals

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with

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giving

a heavy fines

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forfor

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for

perpetrators

as

effective

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ways

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Adapun, opsi lain dari mengurangi angka kriminal replaced a

punishment

with prison. In conclusion,

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think the main basic foundation of increasing mindset humans to obey the rules and

do

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not commit criminal acts is

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in providing

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a based education as early as possible, even in academics or parental upbringing in order to

makes

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a good and bad. So does the government, one of many

ways

to

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a

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number of

criminal

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criminals

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is prioritizing

a

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welfare of

society

and common interests.