In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Technologies always develop to
fulfill
human needs, especially in Change the spelling
fulfil
transportation
sector. In the near future, predicted that mobile transportation Add an article
the transportation
such
as car
, buses and trucks will be driverless. Fix the agreement mistake
cars
This
development of course bring
many Change the verb form
brings
benefit
for Change to a plural noun
benefits
car
owners or passengers of the transportations
, but, there always a downside Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
of
Change preposition
to
this
fenomena especially what will be happen to the drivers
.
Driverless vehicle
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vehicles
is
already happening in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
this
modern era, car
brands just like
Tesla, BMW and Mercedes Change preposition
as
are
already Verb problem
apply
launching
their products Wrong verb form
launched
last
year, even though, right now only wealthy person
can afford Fix the agreement mistake
people
it
. There are many benefits of Correct pronoun usage
them
this
unit, but, there are
one particularly important reason Change the verb form
is
that
is to reduce Correct pronoun usage
which
tiredness
of driving Correct article usage
the tiredness
car
. Many Add an article
a car
the car
accident
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accidents
is
happen because of Unnecessary verb
apply
the
sleepy Correct article usage
apply
driver
, especially Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
for
truck Change preposition
apply
driver
who drive slowly and long Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
distance
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distances
in
the highway. With a self-drive vehicle, the accident can be avoided and of Change preposition
on
course
keep Add a comma
course,
save
the company funds.
Wrong verb form
saving
On the other hand
, this
self-drive system can make
Verb problem
cause
a
new problems Correct article usage
apply
drivers
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for drivers
it self
, especially Correct pronoun usage
themselves
a
people who Correct article usage
apply
working
by driving. Right now, the auto pilot wheels doesnt Change the form of the verb
work
affec
Correct your spelling
affect
on
the Change preposition
apply
drivers
job Change to a genitive case
driver's
drivers'
availbility
, in the future when all Correct your spelling
availability
vehicle
Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
is
driverless, thats when Correct subject-verb agreement
are
drivers
lose their jobs. The wheels
operator Fix the agreement mistake
wheel
need
to prepare for the worst and improve another skill, when the time Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
come
you will be ready.
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comes
For
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In
the
conclusion, the innovation of self-drive cars Correct article usage
apply
in
one of the best Correct your spelling
is
improvement
in Fix the agreement mistake
improvements
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the transportaion
transportaion
sector for human Correct your spelling
transportation
being
, Fix the agreement mistake
beings
furthermore
, we need
keep improving on Add the particle
need to
this
technologies to make it better than before. Correct determiner usage
these
However
, we need to find best
solutions for the Correct article usage
the best
drivers
for their jobs that be
predicted will be replaced by technologies in the near future.Wrong verb form
are
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