In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Technologies always develop to

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human needs, especially in

transportation

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sector. In the near future, predicted that mobile transportation

such

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, buses and trucks will be driverless.

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owners or passengers of the

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. There are many benefits of

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is to reduce

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the highway. With a self-drive vehicle, the accident can be avoided and of

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the company funds.

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technologies to make it better than before.

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predicted will be replaced by technologies in the near future.

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coherence cohesion

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Your opinion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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283 words

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In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Your opinion

Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have same opinions as them, other people believe it’s good to have friend who disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.