The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following line graph depicts the total proportion of
the
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house recyclization in three distinct regions ( United Kingdom, France, Germany) in 10 years period of time from 2005 to 2015. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the countries' rates to increase in percentage were The UK and Germany,
while
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France decreased except for a gradual climb in the given data.
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the figure, England
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from just under 40 per
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in the beginning to go up slowly and stayed at the same level over the next 4 years to peak at more than a half in the end.
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, Germany began from close to none in 2005 to show a constant rise from 20 per
cent
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to just under 60 per
cent
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in 2015. As for remaining, France stood at exactly a half at first to decline considerably by approximately 20 per
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, jumped roughly by a mere 10 number in the final year surveyed.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • household recycling rates
  • trend analysis
  • comparison
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuations
  • plateau
  • progress
  • environmental implications
  • rate
  • peak
  • upward/downward trend
  • percentage
  • consistently
  • period
  • surpass
  • level off
  • stagnate
  • benchmark
  • time frame
  • sustainable practices
  • waste management
  • recycle
  • dispose
  • landfill
  • renewable resource
  • conservation
  • eco-friendly
  • green initiative
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