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Many people choose to learn many foreign languges. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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A lot of people want to learn many foreign
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languages
. The pros exceed
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its
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cons.
This
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advantages
 and disadvantages in detail. On the one hand, there are many factors involved that
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way
why
 it would be good for our brains. First and
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, it has many
benefit
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benefits
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,
for instance
, if we knew some foreign
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languages
language
 we would interact with tourists easily, and make some
connection
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connections
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 with other countries.
For example
,
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 person wants to go abroad to
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pursue
 his major or career,
then
 he has to have
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communication
 with some universities, so it is essential to know their language, and it facilitates our
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interactions
. Another reason
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 is,
it
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that it
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 contributes
our
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 brain to improve our
intellgence
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intelligence
.
As a result
, it is not only necessary but
also
benefficial
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beneficial
 to have
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.
On the other hand
,
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 has
some
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some
draw backs
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drawbacks
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. It will
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 large chunks of time, and some people find it boring. Those who choose to learn many languages,
they
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can not
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fully-focused
 on the other fields.
Moreover
, they may
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forget
 many things to do
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 a daily basis. As learning many
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languages
 is
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frustrating
, they might give up to
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continue
 the rest of that
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language
.
Furthermore
, they start to learn another
laanguadge
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language
. So they do not learn each
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language
 completely. In conclusion,
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languages
language
 play a crucial role in our
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lives
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, because
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communication
 and some jobs require foreign
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language
.
Otherwise
, it helps us to boost
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language
, the more
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efficiency
 we can have in every stage of our life.
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task achievement
Make sure to fully develop your main points with clear and developed ideas, perhaps by expanding on the advantages and disadvantages in a more detailed manner, making it comprehensive.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure the essay structure is logical by organizing ideas and paragraphs in a clear, easy-to-follow manner. Starting with a clear introductory sentence for each paragraph can aid in achieving this.
task achievement
Provide relevant examples that clearly support your main ideas to reinforce your arguments and present a well-balanced view of the topic.
language proficiency
Focus on the accuracy and range of grammatical structures and vocabulary. There are several grammatical errors and misspellings which impact the clarity of your writing.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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