The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
number
of Southland's main exports from 2000 and future
plan for 2025, There are three main exports, Correct article usage
the future
included
international tourism, Dairy Wrong verb form
including
products
and meat products
.
The noticeable one
is number
of International Change the article
a number
the number
tourism
, from 2000, it received more than 8 Replace the word
tourists
billion
and started to increase gradually in the middle years after. They think that it can rising
more quickly and get approximately 10 Change the verb form
rise
be rising
billion
in 2025.
Next,
let’s have a look on
Dairy Change preposition
at
products
. On
the first period time, it got about 7 Change preposition
In
billion
. But, it started to go up dramatically to about 10 billion
in the middle years and will have a little change in 2025.
The Meat products
is
the Change the verb form
are
one
Correct pronoun usage
ones
who
have the least Correct pronoun usage
that
number
. It got 6 billion
in 2000 and go
down steadily Wrong verb form
went
at
the years after. They think it will still level down in 2025.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, Southland’s main exports has
International tourism is the highest Verb problem
are
one
, the second one
is dairy products
and the least
Correct word choice
lowest
number
is
Meat Unnecessary verb
apply
product
.Fix the agreement mistake
products
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, products, one, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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