The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the plans for building a new mall in Brandfield City. It is obvious that there are two proposed locations for
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purpose, which are S1 and S2. In general, both locations are near the city centre. It is
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apparent that the road, railway, and river run uniformly through the x-axis of the plan. The first site marked by S1 is on the northern part, situated between the main centre and residential area, just above the railway which runs from the southeast to the northwest.
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, it is closer to the river compared to S2.
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, S1 is much more accessible as it offers three modes of transportation and close distance of facilities as it sits next to the housing estate and above the central district
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being in the same western region as the golf course and park. These provide easy access for people to shop and enjoy recreation places.
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, the second possible site for the mall construction, namely S2, is in the southern area, just before the intersection
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between the central business district and industrial estate.
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, since it is far from the river, there is a need to rely on land transport,
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as cars, motorcycles, or trains, to remote to the facilities.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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