The diagram illustrates the process of producing bricks from clay for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing bricks from clay for the building industry.
The diagram shows the steps of
bricks
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brick
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production from clay as the raw material until it
delivered
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is delivered
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to
building
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the building
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industry.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are seven major stages, some of which have more than one
parts
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.
The first step is
the clay is
digged
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by a big tractor, and it is
then
moved to a metal grid to crush it into pieces. Afterwards, the pieces of clay are mixed with sand and water, and they are placed in a wire cutter or in a
square-shape-mould
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to become bricks. Once the dough has been dried in the oven
between
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one and two days, they are put in the big temperature box, first at 200 to 980 degrees,
then
to higher degrees (870 to 1300 degrees),
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and finaly
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finaly
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finally
it is cooled at
cooling
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the cooling
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chamber for around two until three days.
Finally
, the final bricks are packaged and delivered by a truck to
building
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the building
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industry.
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  • drying oven
  • kiln
  • firing process
  • cooling
  • quality control
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  • packaging
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