The diagram illustrates the process of producing bricks from clay for the building industry.
The diagram shows the steps of
bricks
production from clay as the raw material until it Fix the agreement mistake
brick
delivered
to Add a missing verb
is delivered
building
industry. Add an article
the building
Overall
, it can be seen that there are seven major stages, some of which have more than one parts
.
Fix the agreement mistake
part
The first step is
the clay is digged
by a big tractor, and it is Correct your spelling
dug
then
moved to a metal grid to crush it into pieces. Afterwards, the pieces of clay are mixed with sand and water, and they are placed in a wire cutter or in a square-shape-mould
to become bricks.
Once the dough has been dried in the oven Correct your spelling
square-shaped
between
one and two days, they are put in the big temperature box, first at 200 to 980 degrees, Change preposition
for between
then
to higher degrees (870 to 1300 degrees), Correct word choice
and finaly
finaly
it is cooled at Correct your spelling
finally
cooling
chamber for around two until three days. Add an article
the cooling
Finally
, the final bricks are packaged and delivered by a truck to building
industry.Add an article
the building
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