The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2020.

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2020.
The provided bar chart depicts the comparison of the role as a teacher of
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in six types of educational places in 2010 in the area of United Kingdom. A glance at the bar chart makes it clear that
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slightly more women worked in a school than
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high education places
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ranked first
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women.It is interesting to note that,in a college the percentage of both sexes was equal. Turning to school places where
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worked more than
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ranked first,by comparison, just 10
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of males taught the children,
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got a high percentage, it can be clearly observed that in private training
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almost the same numbers as males.
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as female.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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