The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart provides data about the average
number
of
hours
per day that
Chinese
, American,
Turkish
and
Brazilian
tourists
spent doing leisure activities on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
,
Chinese
tourists
spent the highest
number
of
hours
on
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reading books,
whereas
Brazilian
tourists
spent the highest
number
of
hours
on
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going to the
beach
. As can clearly be seen, the highest
number
of
hours
spent on reading books was spent by
Chinese
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accounting for 8
hours
, meanwhile, the lowest
number
of
hours
spent on reading books were spent by
Brazilian
and
Turkish
tourists
accounting for 4
hours
.
Brazilian
tourists
spent the highest
number
of
hours
on going to the
beach
with 6
hours
,
whereas
Chinese
tourists
spent the lowest
number
of
hours
on going to the
beach
with 3
hours
which was twice less than the amount of time spent on going to the
beach
by
Brazilian
tourist
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tourists
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. The
number
of
hours
spent at the
beach
by American
tourists
and
Turkish
tourists
were pretty similar accounting for 4 and 5
hours
respectively. Both American and
Turkish
tourists
spent 3
hours
on
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visiting places,
while
Chinese
tourists
spent the lowest
number
of
hours
on
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visiting places accounting for 1 hour.
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