The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart provides data about the average
number
of hours
per day that Chinese
, American, Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
spent doing leisure activities on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, Chinese
tourists
spent the highest number
of hours
on
reading books, Change preposition
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whereas
Brazilian
tourists
spent the highest number
of hours
on
going to the Change preposition
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beach
.
As can clearly be seen, the highest number
of hours
spent on reading books was spent by Chinese
accounting for 8 Correct article usage
the Chinese
hours
, meanwhile, the lowest number
of hours
spent on reading books were spent by Brazilian
and Turkish
tourists
accounting for 4 hours
. Brazilian
tourists
spent the highest number
of hours
on going to the beach
with 6 hours
, whereas
Chinese
tourists
spent the lowest number
of hours
on going to the beach
with 3 hours
which was twice less than the amount of time spent on going to the beach
by Brazilian
tourist
. The Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
number
of hours
spent at the beach
by American tourists
and Turkish
tourists
were pretty similar accounting for 4 and 5 hours
respectively. Both American and Turkish
tourists
spent 3 hours
on
visiting places, Change preposition
apply
while
Chinese
tourists
spent the lowest number
of hours
on
visiting places accounting for 1 hour.Change preposition
apply
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