The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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The bar chart provides data about the average
number
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of
hours
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per day that
Chinese
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, American,
Turkish
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and
Brazilian
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tourists
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spent doing leisure activities on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
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,
Chinese
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tourists
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spent the highest
number
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of
hours
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on
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reading books,
whereas
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Brazilian
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tourists
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spent the highest
number
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of
hours
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on
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going to the
beach
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. As can clearly be seen, the highest
number
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of
hours
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spent on reading books was spent by
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Chinese
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the Chinese
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accounting for 8
hours
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, meanwhile, the lowest
number
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of
hours
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spent on reading books were spent by
Brazilian
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and
Turkish
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tourists
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accounting for 4
hours
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.
Brazilian
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tourists
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spent the highest
number
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of
hours
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on going to the
beach
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with 6
hours
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,
whereas
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Chinese
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tourists
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spent the lowest
number
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of
hours
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on going to the
beach
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with 3
hours
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which was twice less than the amount of time spent on going to the
beach
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by
Brazilian
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tourist
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tourists
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. The
number
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of
hours
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spent at the
beach
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by American
tourists
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and
Turkish
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tourists
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were pretty similar accounting for 4 and 5
hours
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respectively. Both American and
Turkish
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tourists
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spent 3
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on
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visiting places,
while
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Chinese
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tourists
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spent the lowest
number
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of
hours
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on
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visiting places accounting for 1 hour.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, chinese, turkish, brazilian, tourists, beach with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 9 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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