The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five

different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the citizens' expenditures in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and
Turkey
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in the year 2002. The unit of measurement is in percentages.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that Spain recorded the lowest,
wheras
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whereas
,
Turkey
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accounted for the highest in all expenditures. Notably, Food, drinks and tobacco
has
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have
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the highest countries
spendings
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spending
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.
To begin
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with, Food, drinks and tobacco
accounts
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account
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for almost more than a third to a fifth of consumption, making it the highest spending
expenditures
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expenditure
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in all territories. It worth mentioning,
Ireland
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that Ireland
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and
Turkey
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has
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have
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the highest domination of lavishing
of
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about 28.91% and 32.14% respectively in all consumables.
Additionally
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, Italy has the highest paying out on clothing and footwear with others accounting for a very small
number of
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proportion. Leisure and education
was
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observed to have the lowest
spendings
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spending
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in all district consumptions, ranging from the highest of 4.5% which
originate
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originates
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from
Turkey
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and the lowest 1.98% from Spain.
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,
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Sweden and Italy recorded only
a small differences
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small differences
a small difference
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of 0.22% from their amount.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words turkey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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