The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps

depicts

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the former construction and

latter

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the latter

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reconstruction of a recreational facility.

Overall

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, it is noticeable that the new building has some erected houses at the

center

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centre

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, with

inclusion

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the inclusion

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restaurant

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a restaurant

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and reception.

Whereas

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, the beach and trees remained at

same

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the same

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location.

To begin

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with, the flowers located at the previous construction in the north-east end

was

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were

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replaced with new buildings which happen to be in

circular

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a circular

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position built at the right and left ends. Looking at the sea in the previous west end, it has been replaced with a plier and two

tent

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at the vehicle track entrance of the building.

Although

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, the meters of the two buildings still remained at 100.

Beside

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that, there is a newly built swimming pool

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the west region

as well as

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an eatery zone and reception which demarcate the recently erected accommodations. The sea

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the north-east region, trees and beach remained unchanged.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

before and after
transformation
infrastructure
natural features
network of cottages
footpaths
recreational areas
pristine environment
organized lodging facilities
strategically positioned
delineated pathways
untouched nature
accessibility
isolated island experience
enhanced transportation options

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