IELTS Cambridge 16 Essay: Recycling Plastic Bottles The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Cambridge 16 Essay: Recycling Plastic Bottles

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram illustrates how
plastic
bottles are recycled from the initial stage of sorting till the final end products. The main methods used in production are compression, crushing and heating.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are 9 stages of production, which
involves
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collecting the waste products for processing of raw materials for human use. At the initial stage in the recycling of bottles,
plastic
are
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collected from the garbage and transported through a van to the recycling
center
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for sorting, which involves
selection
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the selection
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of the good and bad items.
Then
, it undergoes compression to form blocks, which
is
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are
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crushed with a wheels grinder and washed with the final result of producing
plastic
pellets.
Plastic
pallets are put into a grinding machine, for which they undergo a process through heating to form Raw material.
Following
this
, the Raw materials are
further
packaged in a neatly arranged form and produced as an end meet product for human use.
Finally
, after utilization, it
then
discarded back into a waste can for a repeat recycling process.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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