The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.

The provided graphs depict information on how the Australians used

water

in 2004,

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it shows the percentage of

water

consumption in residential houses. A glance at the pie chart makes it clear that, in the given period, a high percentage of

water

was used in a residential house, which shows 57%

while

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others didn’t even reach 20%. Turning to details on the bar chart, the

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is measured as percentages and there are six fields where the

water

was used. They are

bathroom

, toilet, washing clothes, kitchen, and garden. It can be clearly observed that

bathroom

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and garden ranked

first,

both reached almost 25%. Washing clothes didn’t get as over 25% as

bathroom

and garden but despite

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it could rank third place. Regarding to Toilet and kitchen, compared to

bathroom

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there were less

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.