The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with

date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
The table provides data about underground railway systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC,
Kyoto
and Los Angeles with date opened,
kilometres
of
route
and passenger figures every
year
.
Overall
, Tokyo has the highest
number
of
passengers
every
year
,
whereas
Kyoto
has the lowest
number
of
passengers
per
year
. As can clearly be seen, Tokyo which opened in 1927 and has 155
kilometres
of
route
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has the highest
number
of
passengers
every
year
with 1928
million
passengers
, meanwhile,
Kyoto
which opened in 1981 and has 11
kilometres
of
route
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has the least
number
of
passengers
with 45
million
passengers
. London opened first in 1863 and has the longest
kilometres
of
route
with 394km,
whereas
Los Angeles opened
last
in 2001 and has 28
kilometres
of
route
. The numbers of
passengers
in Los Angeles and
Kyoto
are pretty similar accounting for 50
million
and 45
million
respectively. Underground railway systems in Paris opened in 1900, has 199
kilometres
of
route
and the figure of
passengers
per
year
is 1191
million
,
while
underground railway systems in Washington DC opened 76 years later in 1976 has 126
kilometres
of
route
and the
number
of
passengers
every
year
is 144
million
.
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  • underground railway system
  • chronologically
  • significance
  • correlation
  • discrepancies
  • outliers
  • extensive network
  • limited network
  • urban sprawl
  • efficiency
  • hypothesize
  • passenger numbers
  • kilometres of route
  • date opened
  • major cities
  • data analysis
  • comparative analysis
  • historical context
  • speculate
  • potential causes
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