The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows global rates of illiteracy broken down by gender and
also
area for last
year. It is clear that
some areas have a much higher proportion of people who are unable to read or write.
It is interesting to note that approximately half of women
in South Asia, Arab States and Sub Saharan
Africa cannot read or write Add a hyphen
Sub-Saharan
with
the majority of Change preposition
while
women
in south
Asia and the Arab states are illiterate. Capitalize word
South
This
is compared with roughly a third of men.
In the rest of the world rates of illiteracy are much lower with nearly everybody living in developed countries being able to read and write, falling to approximately 90% in Latin American and Caribbean countries. However
, there are more illiterate women
than men, especially in East Asia/Oceania.
Overall
, although
there are great disparations
in literacy across the globe, Correct your spelling
disparities
women
are much less likely to be able to read or write.Submitted by panus.cho on
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