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The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
#requests #information #tourist #office #kingdom #january #june
The given illustration compares the variety of information request methods in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom in a
6 month
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6-month
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 period. Looking at
an
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the
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overall
 structure, it is readily apparent that the most
favorable
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 means
for
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of
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 communication was face-to-face. Even though
preference
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the preference
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 for
in person
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in-person
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 and
by telephone
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by-telephone
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contact
 underwent dramatical
grow
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 over time, the preference for
by letter
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by-letter
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 or e-mail communication decreased. ​
Initially
, in January, the number of
in person
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in-person
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 contacts started at approximately 400, a number which skyrocketed to
near
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 2000
till
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by
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 the end of June.
Similarly
,
contact
 by telephone began at approximately 900 in January, stabilized at 1000 between March and April,
then
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and then
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 grew to 1600 after 2 months. ​
In
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 the contrary,
contact
 by letter or e-mail started at nearly 800 in January, which was higher than the starting point of in
person
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contact
 method, but dropped to less than 400 in May and kept
this
 number until
finishing
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the finishing
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 period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words contact with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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