The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The  diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The
map
illustrates how the central
library
differs when compared to the floor
map
of the
library
of 20 years ago.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the main hall inside the entrance guarantees a larger space by removing tables and chairs which were located in the centre of the
library
. Looking at the maps more closely, we can see that
this
current
map
is the result of adopting the development of the technology. Though 20 years ago, enquiry desks took up large space in the southeastern part of the
map
, they were substituted with information desks and self-service machines not requiring much space.
Instead
of an enquiry desk, a café was created for rest and relaxation.
In addition
, the computer room was renovated at the southwestern corner of the
library
which used to be a reading room 2 decades ago.
Whereas
there was a big room for CDs, videos, and computer games at the upper right part of the
map
, now there are new sofas for storytelling events and children can enjoy fiction books
now
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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