The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The
map
illustrates how the central Use synonyms
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differs when compared to the floor Use synonyms
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of the Use synonyms
library
of 20 years ago. Use synonyms
Overall
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it is clear that
the main hall inside the entrance guarantees a larger space by removing tables and chairs which were located in the centre of the Linking Words
library
.
Looking at the maps more closely, we can see that Use synonyms
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map
is the result of adopting the development of the technology. Though 20 years ago, enquiry desks took up large space in the southeastern part of the Use synonyms
map
, they were substituted with information desks and self-service machines not requiring much space. Use synonyms
Instead
of an enquiry desk, a café was created for rest and relaxation. Linking Words
In addition
, the computer room was renovated at the southwestern corner of the Linking Words
library
which used to be a reading room 2 decades ago. Use synonyms
Whereas
there was a big room for CDs, videos, and computer games at the upper right part of the Linking Words
map
, now there are new sofas for storytelling events and children can enjoy fiction booksUse synonyms
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