the line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the Regional household recycling ratio in three European countries over a
period
10
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of 10
years
from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, It can be seen that the percentage of household recycling in the Uk
and Germany showed an Upward trend, Correct your spelling
UK
While
France showed a downward trend throughout the period
except the last
two
years
.
To begin
with, The rate of household recycling in the Uk was around 35 percent
in 2005, and it will still increase for the next Change the spelling
per cent
two
years
, In 2009 it jumped about 50 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
at the end
of the period
it was around 60 Add a comma
period,
percent
in 2015. As for Germany in 2005 it was around 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Subsequently
, It increased dramatically to 40% in 2011 and still increased for the next two
years
around 58 percent
in 2015.
However
, France had the highest rate in the beginning, around 50 percent
in 2005. Change the spelling
per cent
Subsequently
, it plunged to 30 percent
in the next 8 Change the spelling
per cent
years
, in 2013 there was a fluctuation in the ratio and showed an upward trend for the next two
years
around 40 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
, that means France had the lowest percentage at the end
of the period
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