the line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph gives information about the Regional household recycling ratio in three European countries over a

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years

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from 2005 to 2015.

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, It can be seen that the percentage of household recycling in the

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and Germany showed an Upward trend,

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France showed a downward trend throughout the

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except the

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two

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years

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in 2005, and it will still increase for the next

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, In 2009 it jumped about 50

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and

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it was around 60

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in 2015. As for Germany in 2005 it was around 20

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, It increased dramatically to 40% in 2011 and still increased for the next

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around 58

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in 2015.

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, France had the highest rate in the beginning, around 50

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in 2005.

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, it plunged to 30

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in the next 8

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, in 2013 there was a fluctuation in the ratio and showed an upward trend for the next

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around 40

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