The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many
books
at Burnaby Public Library were read between 2011 and 2014 by different gender categories: men
and women
.
In four years, women led
by reading more at the beginning of the period before being outraced by Add a hyphen
women-led
men
in the last
year
. As a result
, males finally
turned the gap from falling behind females at the beginning into having an even bigger difference in the number of books
read at the end
of the period.
At the beginning, of the year
2011, women
started with around 5.000 books
read and steadily increased to exactly 10.000 in two years. However
, the amount plummeted by about 3.000 just a year
later, resulting in a shift in rank between them and the men
.
Meanwhile, only less than 4.000 books
were consumed by men
at first in 2011. After that, the number eventually reached 4.000 in a year
before significantly rising to 10.000 in 2013. In that year
, books
read by men
tied numbers with the ones read by women
. After
this
, men
outpaced them and widened the gap to more than 6.000 and hit their peak by reading 14.000 books
at the end
of the period in 2014.Submitted by pramestime on
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