The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralian cities.
The bar graph illustrates five distinct Australian
residents
' percentage of habitual activities of buying and drinking coffee
and tea. Overall
, it can be vividly seen that in the last
4 weeks, city dwellers have relished drinking coffee
at a cafe, except citizens in Adelaide who are very likely to buy instant coffee
. On the other hand
, enjoying fresh coffee
became the last
favourable way for all the residents
.
Looking at the data in a more detailed analysis, all Australians admire going to a cafe to enjoy their drink. Melbourne and Hobart residents
accounted for around 63%, which makes them the highest percentage. However
, in Adelaide, they become the last
position for activity (below a half). Turning to the figure for instance
coffee
, every city makes a similar percentage around 45% in Sydney to almost 55% in Hobart.
For the remaining category, which is drinking fresh coffee
, Brisbane and Adelaide have the lowest proportion of citizens who like to do this
activity. They both have only 34% of the total citizens. Following
this
one, there are approximately 38% of Hobart residents
who like to do the same.Submitted by lulukfuru on
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