The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.

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Jan 29, 2024

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

16 words

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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.

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