The table illustrates secondary and high school teachers’ earnings in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.
Given table provides the amount of income level of secondary and high school
teachers
in the period of
2019 years.
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Overall
, it can be clear, that the most well-paid teachers
were from Luxembourg, while
Australian teachers
were low-paid ones. In addition
, mentors from Denmark took a short period to reach a high salary.
In terms of Luxembourg, secondary and high school teachers
were paid starting from 80,000$ a year comparing
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Australia
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Australian
Korea
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Korean
teachers
which were significantly lower at 28,000$ and 30,000$, respectively. Additionally
, the starting salary for tuitors
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stood at around 40,000$.
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However
, teachers
with 15 years of background in Luxembourg earned up to 119,000$ a year, while
educator
from Australia and Korea were paid with same level of payment at 48,000$ in one year. Fix the agreement mistake
educators
Furthermore
, the figure for Australia
and Denmark scholars remained Correct your spelling
Australian
same
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Korea
educators took more time to achieve Correct your spelling
Korean
greatest
pay.Change the article
the greatest
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