The table illustrates secondary and high school teachers’ earnings in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.

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2019 years.

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, it can be clear, that the most well-paid

teachers

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were from Luxembourg,

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Australian

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were low-paid ones.

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, mentors from Denmark took a short period to reach a high salary. In terms of Luxembourg, secondary and high school

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were paid starting from 80,000$ a year

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teachers

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which were significantly lower at 28,000$ and 30,000$, respectively.

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, the starting salary for

tuitors

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tutors

from other countries

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stood at around 40,000$.

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with 15 years of background in Luxembourg earned up to 119,000$ a year,

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from Australia and Korea were paid with same level of payment at 48,000$ in one year.

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, the figure for

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and Denmark scholars remained

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amount of earnings and

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and

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educators took more time to achieve

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pay.