The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram

illustrate

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how

sugar

is produced from

sugar

cane

, the manufacturing

process

will be discussed

steb

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step

by step. As can be seen, there are 7 steps for producing

sugar

from

sugar

cane

. First thing

first,

farmers put

sugar's

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sugar

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seed

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seeds

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in

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on

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farm-land to

growing

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grow

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sugar

cane

. It takes 12 to 18

month

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months

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to grow and ready for the

process

.

Secondly

, these

sugar

canes are collected by hand and

collecting

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the collecting

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machine

to be

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is

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ready for crushing machine.

Next,

they use

crushing

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a crushing

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machine to get

juice

from

sugar

cane

.

Then

, The

purfying

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purifying

juice

is filtered by

limestone

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a limestone

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filter to clear the

juice

. After that, The

fitered

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filtered

juice

is put in the box called

evaporator

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an evaporator

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for heating till

juice

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the juice

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becomes syrup.

The next step is

called

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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, the

process

separates

sugar

crystals from

syrup

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the syrup

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. After all,

sugar

goes for drying and cooling which is the

last

step of the

process

.