The table illustrates secondary and high school teachers’ earnings in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.

The table illustrates secondary and high school teachers’ earnings in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.
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The table provides information on the salaries of junior and senior high school
teachers
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in five major countries (Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in the year 2009.
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,
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' salaries in Luxembourg stood out the most among the rest. Looking at the details, after fifteen years,
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' income in Australia and Japan
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the amount of their starting year,
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at twenty-eight to forty-eight thousand and thirty-four to sixty-five thousand, respectively. Meanwhile,
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in Denmark and Korea gain less pay rise over the same period with an increase
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more than twenty thousand. In terms of years to reach maximum salary, it is evident that it will only take less than ten years for
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in Australia and Denmark to attain that accomplishment compared to their colleagues in Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea who have to wait for three to almost four decades to reach each of their maximum salaries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary school
  • high school
  • earnings
  • salaries
  • cost of living
  • demand
  • governmental budgets
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • economic health
  • quality of education
  • retention rates
  • social recognition
  • professional status
  • financial stability
  • performance
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