The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.
The line chart describes the number of Australian transfers to Japan,
US
, Correct article usage
the US
China
and India from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, Japan and the US had the same happen which decreased from the top to the bottom. China
had the highest rate and that means Australians prefer to export to China
more than other place
.
Change the wording
another place
other places
According to
the figure, China
started importing in 1990 by 2% after that it increased sharply to reached
28% in 2012. Change the form of the verb
reach
Also
, the US was starting
from 1% in 1990 to 2000 Wrong verb form
started
then
it rose grudally
from 2000 to 2010 and got 6% and it went down slightly in 2012. As we can see, there is a big difference between the heights of the two countries, Correct your spelling
gradually
China
and India.
Japan in the beginning, it was
imported a lot from Australia in 1990, Suddenly it reduced dramatically in 1995 by 6%. Verb problem
apply
In addition
, from 1995 to 2012 the export rate downward to 17%. On the opposite side, the US had many changes in this
period. For example
, from 1990 to 1995 it increased by 4% then
it jumped in 2000 to 11%.Submitted by maltobi08 on
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