Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Plenty of individuals approve of drug testing on

animals

while

some others do not condone

this

particular method. There are some pros and cons in my opinion which I will discuss in detail in

this

essay. On the one hand, having

animals

as drug-tested beings would cost a lot less compared to experimenting directly on

humans

It is clear that

animals

grow much faster compared to

humans

for example

, mice only need days or weeks to grow up into adults.

Furthermore

, the amount of

animals

on the earth currently outweighs the population of

humans

by a significant number.

On the other hand

, society, especially those who love

animals

, would consider

this

as an animal cruelty act. In my opinion, it is reasonable to think of it that way as an animal could potentially suffer or even die after being injected with the drugs.

However

, I do not think that there is another subject that could help with

this

experiment other than

animals

. It is only a matter of what animal could be used and how small the casualties would be inflicted. In summary, I believe

animals

should remain the subject to test medicines rather than

humans

. It might seem that it is some kind of animal cruelty act, but I think

this

method would generate the least amount of damage to society and the environment.

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Fully address both views of the statement before giving your own opinion to show a complete response to the question.

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relevant specific examples

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

225 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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