Task 1: Supermarket Plan The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The maps depict the realisable
position
of the town
supermarket in the town
of Grandson.
By and large, the map illustrates the
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plot
1 in the countryside, while
the
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plot
2 close
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is close
by
the Change preposition
to
town
central
.
Replace the word
centre
Plot
1 is located northwest of the town
of Grandson, near the Hindon population which has 12,000 populations. Initially
, industries are close to position
1, making it easy for workers to buy. However
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However,
plot
1 and plot
2, plot
1 has more access to public transportation, across by
the main road and railway.
Moving on to Change preposition
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position
2, it is located in the central
of the city of Grandson that doesn’t have any traffic zone nearby the area. Replace the word
centre
Furthermore
, site 2 will have more access to the nearby cities of Cransdon and Bransdon, populated with 29,000 and 15,000 respectively. In addition
, position
2 is estimated as the promising supermarket due to
the location being a short distance from the industries and housing area.Submitted by rossdannisa on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words position, town, plot with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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