You recently heard about an international company that you would like to work for. Write a job application letter and say: • How did you hear about the company • What skills and qualification do you have • Why do you want to work there

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Eric Bern and I am writing to inquire more details about your company. It would be interesting to know about an opportunity to join
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your team. Recently, I have flown by
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plane and I heard an advertisement with regards to hiring the employees in your company's staff. At
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moment, I am looking for a job as
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Engineer
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a full-time employee. As I have
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mentioned
above, I am a Software Engineer with ten years
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experince
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experience
of development
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different server-side
as well as
client-side applications.
Further
, I have a university degree in the field of psychology, which allows me to communicate with different types of people and resolve challenging tasks. It is my belief that I would be the greatest candidate
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due to
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of technologies
as well as
my soft skills.
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, I would be delighted to join
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your company and continue developing your product. I would appreciate it if you could send
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my mobile phone number which is: 9379992. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Eric Bern
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Logical Structure
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a unique aspect of the prompt.
Logical Structure
Use a range of cohesive devices (such as conjunctions, synonyms, pronouns) to ensure your paragraphs flow smoothly from one idea to the next.
Greeting and Closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate. However, always end with a signature to enhance presentation.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Try to devote a single paragraph to each point you want to make to ensure clarity and a better structured response.
Complete Response
Expand on your response to include all parts of the prompt. For every point, explain how you fit the needs of the company and provide specific examples of your skills and experiences.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter, avoiding any casual language, and use industry-specific terms when discussing your skills and qualifications.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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