The table shows about underground railway system
The table provides information on the underground train network system in terms of the year the railway system was initiated, the routes covered, and how many
passengers
travelling
annually for six major cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles).
Looking from an Wrong verb form
travelled
overall
perspective, London is the oldest monorail service provider and evidently has the largest route traveled
, but the cities that receive a large number of Change the spelling
travelled
passengers
traveling
annually are Paris and Tokyo.
Looking at the details, London was the first city to open its rail route dating back to 1863, which Change the spelling
travelling
also
offers the longest route, whereas
the Los Angeles railway, which was built in 2001, can be considered relatively new.
Furthermore
, Tokyo's railway service, which was opened in 1927, has the largest number of travelers
(1927 Change the spelling
travellers
passengers
) among all other six cities, while
Kyoto receives the fewest annually (45 passengers
).Submitted by fadhlannaufaall on
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