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The table illustrates secondary and high school teachers’ earnings in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.

The table illustrates secondary and high school teachers’ earnings in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.
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The table represents the income of both higher and
secondary
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secondary-level
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level
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educators
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 from five
ditinct
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distinct
 countries in the year 2009.
Overall
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, the
teachers
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 of Luxembourg were the highest earners all over the period
whether
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while
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 the
australian
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Australian
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teachers
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 were paid
lowest
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the lowest
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 amount among all the nations.
In addition
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, the higher and secondary
educators
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 from
Denmark
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 took very
less
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little
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 time to get the higher wages. The starting rate of salaries for
educators
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 in Luxembourg was 80,000 for both higher and secondary
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level
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levels
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while
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these
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the
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 figure in
Denmark
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 was significantly lower with
the
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a
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 rate of 45,000.
Likewise
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, the wages for fresher
teacher
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teachers
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 in other countries
was
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were
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also
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 low at approximately 30,000. Over the experience of 15 years, the
teachers
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 of
Luxembourge
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Luxembourg
 earned
upto
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up to
 119,000
while
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 the
educators
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 of
Denmark
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 and Japan with
same
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the same
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 experience
level
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 made 54,000 and 65,000 respectively. Meanwhile, the Australian and
korean
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Korean
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teachers
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 stood on
same
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the same
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level
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 of income with 48,000.
However
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, it took only 8 years
to
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for
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Denmark
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 to reach the maximum
level
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 of pay
in contrast
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 to other countries
who
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which
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 took approximately 30 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words level, educators, teachers, denmark with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary school
  • high school
  • earnings
  • salaries
  • cost of living
  • demand
  • governmental budgets
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • economic health
  • quality of education
  • retention rates
  • social recognition
  • professional status
  • financial stability
  • performance
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